tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post1269583118287691200..comments2023-07-30T15:47:32.922+01:00Comments on Pippa Jay: #Science #Fiction #Fantasy Saturday #61Pip Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02141472079095619099noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-61666885430898244942013-06-09T19:59:34.744+01:002013-06-09T19:59:34.744+01:00I also want to know how is came to this!!I also want to know how is came to this!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-90435382825031572612013-06-09T02:46:45.601+01:002013-06-09T02:46:45.601+01:00Talk about throwing us right into the fire along w...Talk about throwing us right into the fire along with him. You've certainly drawn us into his predicament along side him - now maybe we get to find out how he came to be in the "fine mess".S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-75346033793029961342013-06-08T22:45:21.431+01:002013-06-08T22:45:21.431+01:00Poor guy... Great job. I tumbled right along with...Poor guy... Great job. I tumbled right along with him. T. M. Cronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05338638211913479462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-73468833646655941242013-06-08T22:44:23.817+01:002013-06-08T22:44:23.817+01:00Poor guy... Great job. I tumbled right along with...Poor guy... Great job. I tumbled right along with him. T. M. Cronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05338638211913479462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-79117790721481167632013-06-08T18:43:48.705+01:002013-06-08T18:43:48.705+01:00Wow! Just...wow! From your descriptions alone, I d...Wow! Just...wow! From your descriptions alone, I don't want to go through what he just did. Great job of conveying his experience.Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-58172309614009042752013-06-08T16:54:23.672+01:002013-06-08T16:54:23.672+01:00It seems to me that characters are made all the mo...It seems to me that characters are made all the more interesting, and relatable when they go through hell. The details in this make it very easy to see. I felt a little disoriented myself. Great descriptions.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-89963223007083673542013-06-08T16:28:19.885+01:002013-06-08T16:28:19.885+01:00Poor Gethyon! How you torture the lad so! I loved ...Poor Gethyon! How you torture the lad so! I loved this scene and really thought your world-building here was fantastic. The descriptions of the underway were absolutely brilliant. You took him right to the edge and then shoved him off! <br /><br />Great writing!JC Casselshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12359245589507445547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-2887405721097387822013-06-08T15:41:07.881+01:002013-06-08T15:41:07.881+01:00I second Cary's comment--really not a great da...I second Cary's comment--really not a great day for himAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-85051195887339912122013-06-08T14:30:35.905+01:002013-06-08T14:30:35.905+01:00Exciting scene! Lots of great tension, Pippa.Exciting scene! Lots of great tension, Pippa.Heidi Ruby Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02190166838730021237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-41853703104228041572013-06-08T14:29:50.263+01:002013-06-08T14:29:50.263+01:00Yep, that happens after a rough night with your pa...Yep, that happens after a rough night with your pals, getting blitzed on those exotic cocktails and...oh, wait...he's not pie-eyed drunk. Hah! Great scene, and yes, poor Gethyon. I'm anxious to get to read this in my TBR pile up...soooon!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-86015290600659461712013-06-08T13:53:02.034+01:002013-06-08T13:53:02.034+01:00I hope he's old enough to have a drink--sounds...I hope he's old enough to have a drink--sounds like he'll need one by the end of the day, poor kid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-26774730169741158822013-06-08T12:52:10.900+01:002013-06-08T12:52:10.900+01:00Sounds like my kind of hero...great snippet.Sounds like my kind of hero...great snippet.T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-32727491600274263052013-06-08T10:56:47.863+01:002013-06-08T10:56:47.863+01:00Poor hero indeed. This dude's having a ROUGH d...Poor hero indeed. This dude's having a ROUGH day.Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.com