tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post6289130858455109639..comments2023-07-30T15:47:32.922+01:00Comments on Pippa Jay: Six Sentence Sunday #56Pip Greenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02141472079095619099noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-33187547021254265102012-06-21T04:09:34.023+01:002012-06-21T04:09:34.023+01:00Great description of his voice! Love it. :)Great description of his voice! Love it. :)patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-84192486704786405702012-06-12T06:48:05.646+01:002012-06-12T06:48:05.646+01:00Thanks. At the moment this is still a rough draft ...Thanks. At the moment this is still a rough draft WIP, so not even ready for submission yet. :(Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-22654338453103471662012-06-12T06:46:47.789+01:002012-06-12T06:46:47.789+01:00Oh, capprey is their version of coffee. And thank ...Oh, capprey is their version of coffee. And thank you. :)Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-13144123861385830162012-06-11T10:11:51.469+01:002012-06-11T10:11:51.469+01:00What is sweetened capprey? Her blush was well hand...What is sweetened capprey? Her blush was well handled. I never know how to write those in a showing not telling way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-80030446635626461322012-06-10T20:35:17.147+01:002012-06-10T20:35:17.147+01:00I like this. Any idea when it will be out?I like this. Any idea when it will be out?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-72440888197540652542012-06-10T20:00:40.826+01:002012-06-10T20:00:40.826+01:00What an awesome scene. It was a challenge and she ...What an awesome scene. It was a challenge and she met it. It makes him interesting and her admirable. Love this snippet.J.M. Blackmanhttp://blackmanjm.blog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-48605097698917608372012-06-10T19:36:21.096+01:002012-06-10T19:36:21.096+01:00Good for her. She sounds like a good match for him...Good for her. She sounds like a good match for him. Excellent descriptions.Cate Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01371792447604980848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-71885596122664482562012-06-10T19:09:17.828+01:002012-06-10T19:09:17.828+01:00I'm not sure what's more intriguing, his r...I'm not sure what's more intriguing, his reason or her reaction. Lots of possibilities you're building into this relationship.Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-87392091834780142452012-06-10T17:33:48.440+01:002012-06-10T17:33:48.440+01:00Love how you described her blush. The relationship...Love how you described her blush. The relationship between these two will be very interesting as it evolves. Looking forward to following them!Silver Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15606837105470988646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-21830060309859893832012-06-10T16:55:35.807+01:002012-06-10T16:55:35.807+01:00He sounds like a very intriguing character.He sounds like a very intriguing character.D Carneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453390999707087274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-60198658039816669342012-06-10T14:09:19.347+01:002012-06-10T14:09:19.347+01:00Great conflict in this six!Great conflict in this six!Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-80745693674778791102012-06-10T13:47:24.455+01:002012-06-10T13:47:24.455+01:00Such undercurrent there. Snagged by the feeling he...Such undercurrent there. Snagged by the feeling he's testing her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-46792568713881955952012-06-10T13:31:59.881+01:002012-06-10T13:31:59.881+01:00Wonderful :)Wonderful :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-38101033237270279762012-06-10T02:05:02.140+01:002012-06-10T02:05:02.140+01:00Ooh, lots of lovely tension there. Adore the hint ...Ooh, lots of lovely tension there. Adore the hint of bitterness at its heart.Kylie Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06725983727168291939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8195899594127492619.post-7047520304128396802012-06-10T01:45:27.165+01:002012-06-10T01:45:27.165+01:00Great show of her inner turmoil. :-)Great show of her inner turmoil. :-)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com