Sunday, 1 April 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #50


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I'm continuing with Keir this week, and after Quin's help is refused, she resorts to conversation in the hope of making progress...

“Why are you in here anyway?”
“What does that matter?”
“I’m curious and there’s not much else to do.” She tilted her head. “Did you hurt someone?” When he remained silent, her expression darkened. 

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Posted by Pippa Jay at 00:01
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13 comments:

  1. D Carney1 April 2012 at 00:15

    Uh oh. It sounds like someone's about to get in trouble, perhaps.

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  2. Unknown1 April 2012 at 11:58

    I guess his silence has just answered that question. ;-)

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  3. Gem Sivad1 April 2012 at 14:50

    Good non-verbal response. Very interesting characters you've got here.

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  4. Wendy1 April 2012 at 15:22

    Non-verbal responses really say so much more than tone, don't they. 35 days!

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  5. Silver James1 April 2012 at 16:24

    Wow. Now that's a great hook. I can imagine what's going on inside her head at the moment--and all of seems pretty dire. ;)

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  6. patonlorraine1 April 2012 at 17:43

    I like that he answers her first question with a question and then doesn't answer her second question at all. Great dialogue. :)

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  7. Anonymous1 April 2012 at 20:13

    Nice interchange! His silence says it all, as does her stare...

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  8. Sue Ann Bowling1 April 2012 at 21:23

    Somehow she's determined to get him to open up.

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  9. Calisa Rhose2 April 2012 at 01:07

    Now I want to know what's going on. Nice six.

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  10. Liana Brooks2 April 2012 at 01:27

    He he he. Got to love the strong silent types.

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  11. Cate Masters3 April 2012 at 13:02

    Love their communication on a deeper level. She'll get it out of him, lol

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  12. Jeanette3 April 2012 at 19:59

    Interesting. Lots of communication going on behind what they say.

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  13. Monica Enderle Pierce8 April 2012 at 18:13

    Great tension born from simplicity. The sparsity of this entire scene has given it weight.

    (I know this is last week's, but I'm running in slo-mo this week. Also wanted to thank you for commenting on my post last week, Pippa.)

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