Sunday, 30 January 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #11

Hello, welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. I'm continuing with my new fantasy story, which is still unnamed. Darcy and Eoris are at an impasse; he has a blade to her chest but her weapon is aimed at a far more sensitive part of his anatomy!

"Damn," he swore softly, and she laughed, a sound like icicles falling.

"Poor Eoris," she said. "But take comfort. You are the last man standing." The point dug a little deeper as she leaned into him, her voice suddenly cold. "Now step back, or you'll be neither standing nor a man."

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21 comments:

  1. Love her last line! She's feisty. Always look forward to reading more. :)

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  2. Wow - great last line and I'm sure he took a step back - hell if he was smart he would take 3 steps back - lol

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  3. That last one. How perfect! I really like your characters.

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  4. I love her! Bet he stepped back.

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  5. Nicely written, thanks for sharing!

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  6. You take the top of my favorite six lines so far. Love, icicles falling, and what a perfect line to wrap.

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  7. Now, that is an awesome last line! Love it!

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  8. OMG, loved that last line.

    She is a great character!

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  9. A woman after my own heart! *cackles madly*

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  10. She certainly knows how to make her point.

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  11. "Like icicles falling" loved that.

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