Hello, welcome to another Six Sentence Sunday. I'm continuing with my new fantasy story, which is still unnamed. Darcy and Eoris are at an impasse; he has a blade to her chest but her weapon is aimed at a far more sensitive part of his anatomy!
"Damn," he swore softly, and she laughed, a sound like icicles falling.
"Poor Eoris," she said. "But take comfort. You are the last man standing." The point dug a little deeper as she leaned into him, her voice suddenly cold. "Now step back, or you'll be neither standing nor a man."
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Love her last line! She's feisty. Always look forward to reading more. :)
ReplyDeleteWoo hoo!
ReplyDeleteWow - great last line and I'm sure he took a step back - hell if he was smart he would take 3 steps back - lol
ReplyDeleteThat last one. How perfect! I really like your characters.
ReplyDeleteThats a great threat. Feisty! LOL
ReplyDeleteI love her! Bet he stepped back.
ReplyDeleteOuch! Great last line.
ReplyDeleteOMG, great last line!
ReplyDeleteNicely written, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteROFL. Love her!
ReplyDeleteAwesome last line! Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou take the top of my favorite six lines so far. Love, icicles falling, and what a perfect line to wrap.
ReplyDeleteYeowch! great stuff :-)
ReplyDeleteNow, that is an awesome last line! Love it!
ReplyDeleteOMG, loved that last line.
ReplyDeleteShe is a great character!
I did like!!!
ReplyDeleteA woman after my own heart! *cackles madly*
ReplyDeleteShe certainly knows how to make her point.
ReplyDeleteGreat lines!
ReplyDeleteWow! More!
ReplyDeleteBarb
"Like icicles falling" loved that.
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