Sunday, 10 April 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #21

Hello, and welcome to another six. I'm taking a short break this week from Quin and Darion's first meeting in the flesh to test out another snippet from earlier in the series. Quin has arrived on her first alien world at the start of her travels. Please read, enjoy and then check out the other spectacular sixes here!


She must be insane. The only person … no, the only entity who could have helped her, she had sent away. Banished. Because she blamed him for this, for being here. For being alive. And now she was left alone to face a world she didn't know, with no skills for survival other than the luck that had so far cursed her, and with no idea what she would do.


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5 comments:

  1. wow, what a great set up. Danger, intrique, character kicking themselves for being crazy enough to banish help, uncharted world, what's not to love?

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  2. Hi Pippa! Well, looks like I got split off into my own comment dimension again, along with one of my IPs! ~~ waves to Arlene~~

    Love the angst and conflict in her thoughts here--a real "woulda shoulda" moment. I can also sense her isolation and fear. Great Six!

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  3. Somehow, I think he's going to follow her. How could he keep away, especially if she's in danger?

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  4. Lots of angst conveyed here. Sounds like she's in a major rough spot emotionally.

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  5. Oops - that can't be good. The scenario I mean not the six :) nice ammount of conflict going on, so what is this 'entity'??

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