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Sunday, 22 April 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #51


Hello, welcome to another #sixsunday. Thanks so much to those who stop by and comment each week. :)
I'm continuing with Keir this week, and Quin is still trying to coax some answers...

“Did you kill someone?”
“They caught me stealing food.”
“Just a thief, then.”
The accusation, however true, stirred his resentment. “What choice is there when you are penniless and starving?”
“True enough, but you did just threaten to kill me...”

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17 comments:

  1. Great dialogue and I can here the resentment and frustration in the voices you have written here. Love it!

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    1. Thanks, Alix! Great to see you back on SSS. :-)

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  2. Great six! Looking forward to the release! I'm sure you are, too. ;)

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    1. Thanks, Jessica! Oh, yes, the anticipation is killing me! :-)

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  3. 2 more weeks! I can't wait to read this. :)

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  4. Fantastic dialogue here! Loved it x

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  5. Great flow to their dialogue and wonderful pacing. An intriguing six!

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  6. Interesting dynamic between these two. Her "just a thief" seems almost dismissive, then she appears to be trying to make up for it by pointing out he threatened her life.

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    1. Yep, she's trying to figure out how much of a threat he might be.

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  7. This is a "take no shit" woman who is intent on getting answers. I like her a lot!

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    1. Thanks, Gem, really happy to know she has a fan. :-)

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  8. Still wondering how she got in there. I may have to buy this one--mind if I use it for Twitter quotes?

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    1. Well, you can download the first chapter from Lyrical Press for free to answer that question.
      And Twitter quotes? I've not heard about that before, but yes you may. :-)

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  9. Such a teasing snippet! Can I nip into my TARDIS and go forward two weeks to get a copy? lol

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    1. Only if you bring me back my sequel to copy! :-P

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  10. Love the interplay of dialogue, and how she doesn't let him off the hook so easily.

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