Sunday 21 October 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #61

Hello! Welcome to another #sixsunday snippet. I'm continuing with my upcoming release Terms & Conditions Apply. Marie has been offered the services of one of the resident avatars, but she doesn't seem all that impressed despite its appearance...

Cover by Danielle Fine

This particular avatar had been crafted into a ruggedly handsome, if stereotypically human, male. Thick blond hair left a shade too long framed his face perfectly; darker brows arched over eyes the most glorious shade of deep blue she’d ever seen. He was broad shouldered and athletic, and the thin, snug-fitting one-piece in gray outlined the well-defined musculature of his torso in a way no doubt intended to draw attention and tease the imagination of potential clients. A shapely hint of what lay beneath without full disclosure, like the metallic foil used to cover chocolate treats. Also a complete contrast to the man she’d hoped to see, and all too perfect to be real.
“I don’t need your service, thank you very much.”
 
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14 comments:

  1. Niiiiiiiice snippet! :P

    It's okay that I was thinking of the delicious Tom Hopper (Percival from Merlin) as the avatar?Yes? Marvellous!

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    1. Didn't he have his kit off in Merlin last night? In which case yes, not far off. :P

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  2. Fabulous description! I'm curious to know what she is looking for?

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    1. Thanks, Jessica. Right now she wants a starship home. :)

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  3. Ooo, fantastic 6 Pippa! He sounds delicious--uh, I mean, handsome!! teehee ;)

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  4. So she says...

    Very intriguing!

    ;-)

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  5. He sounds like a delicious treat. All wrapped in foil and ready. Great Six. Loved it.

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  6. oh my...what a description! Love the candy wrapper reference. If she doesn't want to be serviced by him, erm, I mean have his service, well...I'm sure there are plenty who do hehe

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  7. Fantastic descriptions...Loved it!

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  8. Love the idea of service avatars and I admire her self-control. ;)

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  9. Just a little confusing having you both on SFFSat and Six Sentence Sunday and giving us stuff on SSS we've already had on SFF. You make him sound like a blond Superman in gray.

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  10. He sounds tempting! Great description!

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  11. Very nice 6! Love the chocolate wrapper line.

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  12. Hehehe. But I'm guessing that she does need, and will get, his services?

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